It's misogynistic. That's true.
It's bland. Check.
It's lazy? Oh, definitely.
One of the original lines from Jon's un-revised work was 'the stuff of nightmares; it looked exactly the way you'd imagine it to be.'
How lazy is that? He's describing his version of hell and we just get told 'well basically whatever you want it to be really.' That's so boring and un-imaginative.
So now he's just trying to rip off Mordor.
Oh yeah, that's a real writer right there. Blatantly stealing ideas because he has no imagination of his own. Even if his idea was similar he could of explained his version of hell a lot better than he did. Only now do we discover that demons get more powerful with age. Before hand we didn't even know if there was a ranking system, even though some demons were killed by bullets whilst others brushed them off.
Then there's some strange sort of portal system in Jon's hell that's never really explained.
Somewhere between the poorly described version of Hell and the 'wolf-like' demons, my soul gave out and I was left a husk of my former self.
Lazy writing; Jon's goes from bad to worse.
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